Friday, 4 May 2012

Excerpt from Chapter 1.....

To give you a small idea of the novel I am writing, I will be post excerpts from every chapter that gets written and typed up. Here is the excerpt from the first chapter:


Part of Stewart’s method for curbing his junior co-worker’s temptation to open his mouth and talk to anyone he wasn’t supposed to about this, who would then feel the very human urge to gossip unnecessarily about the secret they had been let in on, was to chat about the occurrence as if they were talking about shopping, mowing the lawn, or worrying about monetary concerns.  Stewart was still experiencing all three of these considerations, plus a dozen or so more, in his married life.  When he was on the verge of leaving his teenage years behind, domestic harmony had been the advertisement to sell the concept of marriage to him. The accumulation of adult-based sensibilities had allowed him to cope with him waking up to the truth that the sales pitch was a sugar-coated fabrication, with the reality not rewarding him with any of the delights promised; all he received instead were dirty nappies, sleepless nights, marital arguments – one or two, in his case, leading to two trial separations – and psychologically-felt disenchantments. The only       flame of hope that burned was that he wasn’t going to suffer alone:       his circumstances were undoubtedly common.



He had definitely been a stabilising influence in Paul’s own life, taking on the responsibility of looking out for, and professionally nurturing   the new boy.  When he and Paul weren’t being one part of a scheme to remove outer space vehicles from the locations they landed at, their occupation was to commute furniture from one property to the newer residence.  The jobs they did in amongst this could slip into the gaps in between the duration of every time they ensured somebody’s personal, house-based possessions made it safely from the house that had been sold to the one that had been bought, so that it became unofficial enough for no impetus to be available that might make anyone’s curiosity fire up.  It could not be seen to be anything special, certainly not in private discussions.  These examples of verbally exchanging information had to be kept within the psychological and physical boundaries set by the powers-that-be.  The one freedom they did have was to express their views on these jobs to each other.  Yet, in spite of there being over five years of these conversations, Paul had never asked the obvious question relating to their recent endeavour, until now.


Next excerpt coming soon.....

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